I had an excellent talk last night with Amanda about poetry, trying to be a writer, and the Sublime. It really got me thinking. I feel like I have this great potential, just under the surface, and eventually, I can bring it out.
First of all, I need to write on a more regular basis. That is why for the next 40 days (Lent) I am going to write something everyday. I need to get over my fear of failure. Sometimes I will fail. Sometimes I will write poems that completely suck. But if I keep working through it, I will start writing more good poetry than bad.
Second, I need to let go of conventions. It's like that scene in Fight Club where he is driving the car, and he let's go of the wheel to prove that, really, he doesn't have control; that there is no control. I don't really know how to put this thought into workds; it's in the same vein as the Sublime, therefore relatively indescribable. But I feel it in my heart & gut; good poetry is written with your eyes closed. It can't be approached logically, like an essay; it's a matter of the heart.
Well, off to poetry writing class.
Wish me luck.

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"Life is rushing by like a mad swolen river.
One minute roses are opening inthe garden
and the next, snow is flying past my window."
~Billy Collins
aside from this test i don't want to study for, i am well.
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"Life is rushing by like a mad swolen river.
One minute roses are opening inthe garden
and the next, snow is flying past my window."
~Billy Collins
wait, that person is no. too...
yay! we're both a winner!
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hope you're well kyely!
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Jesus said: "Come fourth and you shall recieve eternal life!"
I came in fifth and got a toaster.
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-Dual Designs-you check out my shit, I check out yours!
thanks for the watch, I'll have to check out your writing sometime, but I'm tirrrred and fuzzy, so I'll get back around here.
Nice name by the way.
and I don't know what the actual name of that game is....my thing was more of a description than a title....I guess its just courtesy....Shrug.
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what you don't understand you can make mean anything.- Palanhiuk
thankyou a heap for the kind comment.. I'm checking out your short story right now, its looking good, and I've only read a few sentances!
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any comment is useful
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I was like Jesus...now i'm like Jes.
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Consider the daffodil. And while you're doing that, I'll be over here, looking through your stuff.
welcome to us!!! you are going to LOVE it here, mostly because WE are going to love you here! i'm really stoked about reading your work, and growth in all forms from the confluence of ideas that shall be our warcry! lets share words ^_^
p.s. rachel loves you.
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'if you want to see the future
go stare into a cloud'
no joke.
i'm so serious.
she is my true love.
and an awesome poet.
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Consider the daffodil. And while you're doing that, I'll be over here, looking through your stuff.
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"Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night."
-Edgar Allan Poe
I write short stories occasionally, but I feel really drawn to poetry lately. I also hope to get involved in photography soon.
I am very, very open to criticism & reading others' work!
and deviantWatch me and i will take a look when you post same art...
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I was like Jesus...now i'm like Jes.
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send me a note when you post some art, and i will come take a look at it.
if you have any questions or need help feel free to ask me about it.
here are some helpful links
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As you are now so once was I.
As I am now so shall you be.
So take my hand, and follow me."
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